Why does editing always
feel like a battlefield? Editors are not the enemy.
Yep you read right, I`m writing about editor. With my 2nd book Dance of Love, as I went through editing
notes from one of the senior editors, I had to remind myself that editors are
not the enemy. Sure the process can be painful *cringe* and at times seem silly
especially if there`s cultural and international differences (I`m from South
Africa, my editors were from Alaska/US).
There`s a lot to be explained during content edits and also to see
whether the average reader would understand certain references if not from SA. In
SA we ascribe more to the Queens English but because we also have a lot of
exposure to American television, we can navigate without too much hassle. Though
I have to add, I was mildly surprised when SA comedian Trevor Noah weren`t able
to make the link that a napkin (use in the States) and a serviette (use in SA
and UK) was basically the same thing, only named differently. Details like this
are pointed out during the editing process. Fun stuff. (Is my sarcasm showing?
*wink*)
During senior edits more fine tuning are usually done. By this stage
you`ve gone through about 3 rounds of content editing and 2/3 line edits. With
my first novel I`d done about 4 rounds of content edits and then line edits. This
is understandable since it was my first ever ‘grown up’ book and as a newbie
author I`m a rookie when it came to what a polished novel looked like. So my
second book needed less work in certain areas and a bit finer tuning in others.
Doesn`t mean it was less painful *pulls face* because if truth be told, I`m a
bit of a pantser as opposed to a plotter and sometimes a hybrid of the two.
And while I`m talking about pain, let me just say as much as I love
being an author I absolutely dislike editing. It`s definitely the work part of writing. BUT because I love
writing, because I want to be taken seriously as an author and because I simply
don`t want to get thrown with virtual rotten eggs and vegetables, I will endure
it, embrace it and eventually come to love it. In my writing journey I`ve come
to the simple realization that editors are there to enhance your story, take it
to the next level. I`ve saved all their suggestions since I`ve started to write
in earnest. And when I`m working on a new project, I would when self-editing,
go to those folders and then go through my manuscript.
Don`t get me wrong, I`m not completely there yet and I don`t think
I`ll ever be. Some of my stories will probably be stronger in one department
than others. I think that`s just a testament to the type of person, personality
and writing style you have.
When I look at Falling for Mr.
Unexpected and Dance of Love, the
stories differ considerably even in writing style. And that`s because the main
character`s voice is younger in Dance of Love than in Falling for Mr.
Unexpected. I think that impacts how you write, and how you`ll edit.
Receiving editing comments always conjures up those memories of
teachers making corrections in red pens through my homework. I never liked it.
It always brought a sense of shame (as extreme as that sounds) because your
work weren’t ‘good enough’, you weren`t ‘smart enough’. And I guess as I grew
up and worked on not getting corrections, the less red in my work, the
‘smarter’ I became. Throughout my scholastic years I did become ‘smarter’ or as
I like to say ‘book-smart’. But I also became ‘street-smart’, if I can call it
that.
I realized that not all teachers would think certain things needed
correcting whereas others were demons with their red pens. And as I went on to
university, the same principle applied. I once cum lauded an assignment not
because I was so ‘smart’ but because I was ‘street-smart’. After careful
deduction I concluded that my professor loved the ‘sound’ of his own ideas and
because of time constrictions (exams were looming) I decided to skip on my
notions on a particular subject and basically gifted him his opinions right
back to him. Of course written
beautifully as if they were mine*ha ha ha* Easiest A I`ve ever gotten in my
life!
This is how I view editing. So far I only have experience with
Decadent Publishing`s style of editing. I`m sure other houses have different or
similar styles. Because I`m a reader as well as an author, I spot the
differences between books. Some things Decadent would never allow to appear in
their books, I notice in others (big/small traditional, self-and e-publishers).
Editing therefore, is a subjective game, like most things in life.
The crux then lies in conforming to the house you`re contracted with and to not
take every suggestion (because that`s what it ultimately is) as a personal
attack or ‘what I`ve written isn`t good enough’. It`s enough, you`re enough,
you got a publishing contract BEFORE the edits. Now buckle down and make that
baby shine! *grin*
All the best fellow writers of this wonderful journey!
Author Bio:
Inge Saunders fell
in love with books when she started reading romance novels with her
grandmother. Intrigued by the worlds books unlocked, it was inevitable she would take pen
to paper.
At age fourteen she wrote her first novel which wasn`t such a roaring
success according to her brother. Not discouraged, she realized something
fundamental: as a writer you can only write about what interests you, a principle she still upholds in
adulthood.
When she`s not
writing about that ‘inexplicable attraction’ she`s reading almost every sub-genre in romance out there, spending time with friends and family and taking hikes in her
hometown`s National Karoo Park.
She forms part of Romance writers` Organization of
South Africa (ROSA) and currently has two books out with Decadent Publishing; Falling for Mr. Unexpected and new
release Dance of Love.
Twitter: https://twitter.com/IngeUlrike
Facebook:
http://ingesaunders.facebook.com
Other Sites:
http://ingesaunders.goodreads.com
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Inge Saunder's new release:
DANCE OF LOVE
All roads lead to Rome when Ashley Solomons embarks on fulfilling her dream to become a world-class dancer. But there’s one person who stands in her way. “It`s a no from me,” Antonio Machiavelli.
When Antonio’s auditions for a lead principal end in wintry Cape Town, the last thing he expects is to have more than a knee-jerk reaction to an audition. Ashley not only verbally challenges him, but also translates her fire and cheekiness into an edge of your seat performance.
Can Antonio keep his distance from Ashley? Can Ashley focus on fulfilling her dream of becoming a lead principal? Or will love have its way?
Buy Link:
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At times, editors can feel like our enemies but they have what's best for our stories in mind when they tell us to make changes. Our books are always better for it. With that said, I still get nervous when I get the first round of edits back from my senior editor.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you Chrys, they do. But I still start singing 'The climb' when I working on them.lol Thanks for stopping by!
DeleteAll of us need help polishing our manuscripts - whether it comes from editors, agents, or clever CPs. Considering I noted some grammatical and punctuation disparities, perhaps South Africa's version of the "Queens English" (which should be "Queen's") isn't quite the same as in the UK or the US. Yes, editing is hard but very worthwhile - it shows respect for our readers. Congratulations on your new release, Dance of Love, and I hope you publish many more!
ReplyDeleteWhich is probably a good thing I'd never write a post on grammar, because I do suck at it *laughs* Thank you Lexa and thank you for stopping by!
DeleteI could write first drafts forever, too, but I'm learning to love the revision. Well, love is a strong word, but I'm getting there :)
ReplyDeleteMe too, I'm in a 'this is what writers have to do'-relationship with editing. I call it the 'work' part (as if writing that baby isn't! *ah*)
DeleteThank you for stopping by Jemi :)
Some people like editing, but I'm always more comfortable with the first draft where everything is up for grabs. The edits are where you really have to knuckle down and turn what you've got into a book, which can be gruelling, but those editors have got your best interests at heart!
ReplyDeleteI know, (I know) and yet I sometimes want to grab'em by the...uh....*laughs* They are wonderful human beings. And my books would be filled with errors (like this post!) if I didn't have any :)
DeleteThanks for having me today Nas :)
ReplyDeleteI love to write but editing would be my downfall... I think it is awesome that you are learning so much from this process... ♡
ReplyDeleteI'm working on my third book (1st draft) and have to say, I've taken to heart (albeit a painful process lol) my previous lessons. Absolutely a steep learning curve :)
DeleteCongrats, Inge! I always have to take some time after reading over edits or a critique before I can dive in to fixing the manuscript to come around to the editor's way of thinking. And I'm saying that as someone who has worked as an editor too. On the editor side, we're trying to make your book the best it can be. On the writing side, I do get what editors are trying to do, but at the same time, it still stings a little. Now I try to implement what I think my editors might want me to change before I send it to them. It doesn't mean the manuscript won't bleed, but maybe it'll not be quite as bad. :)
ReplyDeleteMe too, I've learned to rather take my time, look at every possible thing I can, change what's in my capacity to change and accept that there will be suggestions. When you're too close to something you can't always see what needs fixing. So I'm at that stage of my editing journey. I`m glad you guys exist! :)
DeleteNice to see you here, Inge. Editing is not my favorite aspect of the writing process. But like you, I try to learn what I can through it and try to streamline my approach for the next project. Nas, thanks for hosting!
ReplyDeleteThank you Karen, it's nice to be here :)
DeleteAnd thank you for stopping by. I'm learning to focus on the good aspects :)
Editing is excruciating. My eyes and entire brain get so tired, but it is a necessary phase to get that manuscript ready for the public eye.
ReplyDeleteSo true Medeia! :)
DeleteEditing is always challenging isn't it? Wishing you much success and many sales.
ReplyDeleteAw thank you Sandra :)
DeleteUgh! It is the tough part. When you have to fix a problem and you just can't figure out HOW. I'm going through that right now!
ReplyDeleteAll the best Stephanie! The #struggle is real :)
ReplyDeleteI love and hate editing and my feelings can change within seconds. But it's necessary. Painful, but necessary.
ReplyDeleteSo true, I`m gearing up to embrace it again :)
DeleteWhat an interesting post! Editing is definitely a lot of work. While I am editing my brain feels like it is melting- but afterwards it is amazing to step back and see how much better the ms is! :)
ReplyDelete~Jess
The end result always makes it worth it! :)
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